Monday, July 6, 2009

The lost moments

The memories, the thoughts has to stay,
The joy, the happiness ,is at its bay.

The rolling drop gathers it all,
Not just a drop to call.

She rips apart your heart,
Digs in the moments of the depart.

Many a thought,many a mind
But not a beam did she find

Its all that she regrets
But the memories never forget

Its dark dark the silence bark
She seeks the lost not the last

Leaving behind are the loved ones gone,
Hurts in ,is a venomous thorn

She looks for the moment u lived,
she lives with the moments u loved.

5 comments:

  1. this is really very good among those poem which i have read yet.... really it is superb..... u have put lot of efforts...... u can really become good poet.......

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  2. its a very nice poem,i hv read,its makes the person whose loved one lost their life in carnage to put their memories close to them and feel like its a part of life,evryone comes with one or other form of darkness and silence,but one thing life moves on at the end of the day......

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  3. excellent one dear i have no words to describe, never knew you had such a talent too.....your imagination......big round of applause to you.

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  4. Too good, really well one to start with. the memories have its own place in every once heart you have brought out it in words very well. keep on writing such poems. its really marvalous.

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